Eli ’s Reviews > The Name of the Wind > Status Update
Eli
is 67% done
bro why are all the women written the same…
why is kvolth’s first reflex when he sees a woman for the first time to comment on her appearance…
why do all the men talk about women like theyve never actually spoken to one…
the male gaze, i swear.
honestly so far, really fun story, but i am getting more and more fed up by male gazey stories where the rare women mentioned have no personality
— Aug 11, 2025 05:49AM
why is kvolth’s first reflex when he sees a woman for the first time to comment on her appearance…
why do all the men talk about women like theyve never actually spoken to one…
the male gaze, i swear.
honestly so far, really fun story, but i am getting more and more fed up by male gazey stories where the rare women mentioned have no personality
Like flag
Eli ’s Previous Updates
Eli
is 86% done
okay this is getting so long and boring, i don’t find the dialogues interesting (maybe because the only other character right now is a woman with no personality (men, please learn what a woman is)), there is no development of any sort, and unless there’s a huge twist i don’t see this going anywhere interesting
— Aug 12, 2025 03:19AM
