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Why is she pushing if she’s having a scheduled c section?

How are they both asleep when she gets up and then she’s sick and they come running but Sam is in a towel as if he’s showered…

Why wouldn’t she be pregnant considered her heat and lack of protection. This is so dumb.

She’s upset but instead of them all coming to fix it, one comes to sleep with her. She describes 2 as kind and caring and the other 2 in a sexual way. There are mistakes everywhere. It feels like it’s been written by a teenage boy on Wattpad.

This feels very juvenile.

Also, “I’d let her easy tonight” doesn’t read well.

Eww why’d she forgive them so easily!!! They literally kidnapped and sold her and they didn’t grovel (especially Grant). So much sexual context but no emotional or actual connection 😒

The character descriptions come in such a weird order and are broken up. It’s annoying.

Few inconsistencies and I hate when they say clitoris over clit in a sexy scene. It’s so anatomical.