Christal’s Reviews > Huckleberry Hill > Status Update
Christal
is 3% done
I feel like this is very sappy and starting way to quick for my liking. I’m going to continue but I hope it gets better.
— Aug 13, 2025 12:29PM
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Christal
is 30% done
Very over dramatic… and why is she always hugging and kissing her dad on the cheek when he enters a room. Is this a USA thing?
— Aug 14, 2025 08:25PM
Christal
is 10% done
Constantly having to read “this is banter” or “we’re flirting” on every page is really pulling me out of the story. If the banter or flirting isn’t coming through naturally in the writing, and you have to spell it out every time, it just becomes frustrating.
— Aug 13, 2025 08:02PM
