Laurel’s Reviews > Reflections in a Golden Eye > Status Update
Laurel
is 71% done
Really good but so much narration/exposition. The bit about viewing a peacock and viewing something tiny and grotesque in its single eye is making sense as this story seems to be entirely about the grotesque reflections of small people. Really enjoying the mid century military milieu. Great characterization.
— Aug 17, 2025 04:58AM
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