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it's also way too focused on trying to be funny, but the jokes aren't really landing for me bc they're so decontextualised. it's like a satire that's completely divorced from reality.
i like the idea of having three perspective characters with distinctive voices, but the problem is that they all sound far too similar to each other
— Aug 22, 2025 07:41PM
i like the idea of having three perspective characters with distinctive voices, but the problem is that they all sound far too similar to each other
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was this edited.....like at all, on a line level. so many typos and repetitive sentences
— Aug 23, 2025 08:00AM
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also is it just me or is this trying too hard to be gender-inverted succession. just feels like a worse version of succession. to me
— Aug 22, 2025 07:42PM
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this is very repetitive, narrative structure is messy and the story has no real forward thrust
— Aug 22, 2025 07:28PM
