Shannon Brown’s Reviews > Shattered Dreams > Status Update
Shannon Brown
is 53% done
The pacing has slowed a lot, but still a decent read.
— Aug 23, 2025 11:41AM
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Shannon Brown
is 60% done
The dialogue is a little stilted. And there are strange smatterings of British English. I think the writer may be Canadian. This explains the lack of locale and American details.
— Aug 23, 2025 12:22PM
Shannon Brown
is 24% done
There are flashbacks which are unnecessary imo. The pacing through the present is nice tho.
— Aug 23, 2025 09:46AM
