Maxineee’s Reviews > The Rainfall Market > Status Update

“his aura of darkness seemed like he could go with days without food or water”
okay
sure
whatever

serin gulps more than she speaks

so far a lot of world building is very gimmicky, there was a lot of missed opportunities to make the market more otherworldly. also the early mystery of serin’s special ticket is cut short. we already got something eerie through the reaction when her ticket was punched. don’t randomly change povs to tell us that lady is having her followed, just show her on the phone and then have serin see shadows later, done