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Ashley
is 73% done
This could have been so good. Especially in our current political climate. But it's just... not. Too much repetition. The characters are boring and not very developed.
— Nov 04, 2016 04:57AM
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Ashley
is 60% done
I'm convinced this would be a good novella if all the needless repetition was taken out.
— Nov 03, 2016 10:18PM
Ashley
is 33% done
I don't know. I may DNF this. Not that the story isn't good but the writing.....
— Nov 03, 2016 11:57AM
Ashley
is 25% done
Okay so far. Do think Charlotte thinking the word "pussy" is old with the good girl image. The girl felt bad for saying shit.
— Nov 03, 2016 06:35AM
