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Gripping story from the outset, good clear writing; characters a little thin so far although some foreshadowing suggests development ahead
— Aug 25, 2025 03:59AM
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Salim
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The ebook has missing line breaks, unbalanced quotation marks. These formatting issues are distracting and lead to passages where the speaker or action becomes unclear.
— Aug 26, 2025 06:03AM
