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Yup...Luc has been trafficked. Him going missing the exact night his teacher "deflowers " him.....especially when you consider all the weirdos Edward hangs with........

"My yearning for his lean, fit body became a flustered envy of it, a hopeless need simply to be seventeen,
to be half my age, at the wondering outset"





KNEW ITTTT!!! Just like Nabokov's Humbert Humbert, Edward's desire for the underage subject of his desire was hinged on proximity to innocence and the consumption of youth- perversion in the crudest sense. The penultimate sex scene cut me in half, 4stars loading

" I was mad with love; and
only half-aware, as the rhythm of the fuck took hold, of a deaf desire
to hurt him, to watch a punishment inflicted and pay him back for
what he'd done to me, the expense and humiliations of so many weeks."

I CANT BELIEVE ALAN WENT THERE!!!!!!!(😀)

I was distinctly paranoid,
I thought there was something quite plain clothes about him, almost
leaning on me, sceptical, observant. Then I remembered he was only a
teenager, and that he never noticed the same things as I did, certainly
never noticed me.

"I thought, if the queens in here knew what he had
between his legs . . . I was basking for a second or two in the simple
randy thrill of being with a truly huge-cocked kid."

This chapter has been the hardest...our pedophile main character has intruded on the 17yo student he's teachings friendgroup....and he thinks he's being so likable and "hip" but you can tell from the subtle things around him that they all are dying for their 30yo teacher to stop talking to them at the club. He's so pushy and weird.

How wrong it was to disclaim
our adolescence, to wince at its gaucheries and ignorance, when we
would be lucky to recapture its first-hand vividness and certainty.