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is on page 18 of 398
Holding out hope that the bad prose was an intentional creative choice and that it will improve as the character grows. because if its like this for 375 pages, then i’m not sure i’m going to be able to finish this book.
— Aug 28, 2025 10:40PM
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Hot Ham Water
is on page 33 of 398
the last 15 pages were both significantly worse and yet slightly more tolerable the first 18.
— Aug 31, 2025 10:41PM
