Lucas’s Reviews > If Not, Winter: Fragments of Sappho > Status Update

Lucas
Lucas is on page 251 of 416
just now goldsandaled dawn
Aug 31, 2025 12:10PM
If Not, Winter: Fragments of Sappho

flag

Lucas’s Previous Updates

Lucas
Lucas is on page 118 of 416
yes! radiant lyre speak to me
become a voice
Aug 31, 2025 12:06PM
If Not, Winter: Fragments of Sappho


Lucas
Lucas is on page 107 of 416
I don't know what to do
two states of mind in me

What a cool depiction of conflict! But isn't it three states of mind? One in favor of x, the other in favor of y, the third, above and beyond them, torn between the two? What of the third?
Aug 21, 2025 05:10PM
If Not, Winter: Fragments of Sappho


Lucas
Lucas is on page 97 of 416
Some really interesting short poetry. 46 especially.

and I on a soft pillow
will lay down my limbs

Seems like a reference to 'Eros the limb loosener,' but I'm not sure...
Aug 21, 2025 05:07PM
If Not, Winter: Fragments of Sappho


Lucas
Lucas is on page 73 of 416
Two golden poems:

33

if only I, O gold crowned Aphrodite
could win this lot

36

I long and seek after
Aug 21, 2025 07:25AM
If Not, Winter: Fragments of Sappho


Lucas
Lucas is on page 43 of 416
...

] among mortal women, know this
] from every care
] you could release me

...

] dewy riverbanks
] To last all night long

--

The whole dynamic of fragments is so interesting to me. This could be a standalone poem! But there is something more Sappho wants to say.
Aug 21, 2025 07:11AM
If Not, Winter: Fragments of Sappho


Lucas
Lucas is on page 25 of 416
Interesting: Sappho keeps discussing "loosing wrongs" -- not sure what that means.

Eg: "to loose all the wrongs he did before (25)"
Aug 20, 2025 03:36PM
If Not, Winter: Fragments of Sappho


No comments have been added yet.