Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer’s Reviews > The Dollhouse > Status Update

The whining...all cut off due to her sudden momentary death. Ugh. No way can I rationalize this high than a two and really it's probably a 1 star :(

I'm so tired of Riley's rants about her controlling parents... Go see the old doc and get him to get them off your back!! She's such a whiner... I can't believe she burned down his place of work!!

An ultimatum with Wilson and more masterbation, yay... (Sarcasm)

Well that wasn't the half of it! No teenager of mine us reading this...

"And I was back to being numb. My sisters were gone, Wilson was busy, and I couldn’t even give myself a few minutes of pleasure. What was the point of any of this?" Masterbation... It's just not what I want to read about...

Haha I knew he'd find the real toad

Love this dad... “Why do you think I’m in love?” He stared at me like I was an idiot. “Well, we can start with the obvious if you want.” With a point to my full hands, he said, “We just spent almost three hours going from store to store so you could find her a toad. Tell me why.” Love Wilson realizing he is on love!!

He smiled when he got to me. “I would love to spend the day with my sons going on a wild goose chase for a toad. This is going to be a special day for you when you look back on it. I’d love to be a part of it.” Love this dad!! Why isn't he in the story more talking with Wilson!!

"I scoffed. “Why should I believe that I’m the thing that can make her happy?” “Because she tells you that you are,” he stated like I was stupid. “You don’t get to decide if you make her happy or not.” " love this between Wilson and his dad! Go dad!!

This date out with Wilson was cute but I feel such a disconnect from Riley's internal life and what happens to her... I wish the 2 flowed together...