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jacccc
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So far….. ugh.
This reads like a 7th grader who just picked up a thesaurus. When I got to the masturbation scene, I wasn’t even repulsed or shocked by the content— I couldn’t be, because the writing was so ass. You don’t need an alliterative adjective before every noun just like you don’t need 60 different words to describe a vagina. Jesus
— Sep 01, 2025 09:35AM
This reads like a 7th grader who just picked up a thesaurus. When I got to the masturbation scene, I wasn’t even repulsed or shocked by the content— I couldn’t be, because the writing was so ass. You don’t need an alliterative adjective before every noun just like you don’t need 60 different words to describe a vagina. Jesus
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