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It’s ranging from okay to a pain.
Love the premise and some bits are entertaining. But there’s a lot of telling vs showing which is making it jarring to read.
This is especially true for Tunde’s chapters but has occurred for others as well.
— Sep 13, 2025 02:11PM
Love the premise and some bits are entertaining. But there’s a lot of telling vs showing which is making it jarring to read.
This is especially true for Tunde’s chapters but has occurred for others as well.
