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Victoria
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The story is picking up now that we're with Dan's family - side note: who names a MMC Dan? That's not a romantic name! Aside from the dialogue I'm liking the story so far.
— Sep 03, 2025 10:36AM
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Victoria
is on page 215 of 368
Okay, the tension between Jane and Dan is starting to get giddy! Really enjoying it except for the awkward dialogue banter that pulls me out of the story.
— Sep 04, 2025 10:53AM
Victoria
is on page 72 of 368
The FMC is trying a little too hard to be the right amount of hot mess. The characters also feel a bit young, I like when Annabel does older mom FMCs.
— Sep 02, 2025 10:42AM
