phillip smith’s Reviews > An Arrow to the Moon > Status Update
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I can already tell 15-year-old me would've eaten this up.
— Sep 03, 2025 08:03PM
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phillip smith
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The multiple POVs are really not working for me. I don't think any of these people, aside from our main couple, are fleshed out enough to warrant a POV. And it feels strange that you would get a scene from the perspective of one person and then the next chapter is from someone else's POV, but they are quickly running you through their thoughts on what just happened last chapter. It just feels messy and repetitive.
— Sep 05, 2025 12:00PM
