Rebecca’s Reviews > Giving Me Butterflies > Status Update

Talking about how she misses the other teacher, her colleague, but we don’t even know what happened
Did she die or is she just injured

So many plot holes

Basically just woke up one morning and decided to break up with him and told him in 2 sentences…

Different parts don’t match like the author forgot what she wrote

The FMC told her bf about a text message and later in the book it says she didn’t tell her

Doesn’t match

Random change of POV for like one paragraph and the back to normal

This book is good but not well edited

Noticed a few typos

Don’t like the constant back and forth between present and past
Like it’ll start out in the present then we get a look into the past for so long you forget it’s actually just a ‘flashback’ and then it’s the present again und you barely remember what happened in the beginning

Also feels like there’s a lot of unnecessary info. I don’t need to know her whole morning routine and how she washes her hair