Corvus’s Reviews > Revival > Status Update

SK, you have been writing forever and yet you still write about women like a 14 year old boy sneaking a look at Internet pron. I gave this audiobook shot as I had heard it was a different style. It's good but, we just surpassed a section where your protagonist in a couple paragraphs describes 3 women's bodies in objectifying detail including Mom and daughter. I'd say grow up but plenty of young boys are more mature.