Beth’s Reviews > The Other Bennet Sister > Status Update

Beth
is on page 277 of 463
Wow. We went from a tedious slog to a sudden appearance of every cliché. There are aspects of this I approve as reasonable, but unfortunately, the author has completely obliterated any resemblance to the source material in order to get to this point and it feels like we've gone fully into self-insertion fanfiction dot net mode. The speed at which perfect strangers confide intimate feelings to each other is WILD.
— Sep 10, 2025 12:11AM
Like flag
Beth’s Previous Updates

Beth
is on page 434 of 463
You CANNOT be serious. Why would MARY BENNET, A RATIONAL, REGENCY woman EVER complain about convention and the rules of polite society!?! To even CONSIDER writing to a MAN her romantic feeeelings?! MA'AM. LIVING AT YOUR AUNT'S HOUSE FOR ANY PERIOD OF TIME CAN'T MAGICALLY TURN A MARY BENNET INTO A MARIANNE DASHWOOD!! WHAT IN THE POLLUTED SHADES OF PEMBERLEY IS THIS!?!?
— Sep 13, 2025 11:02PM

Beth
is on page 429 of 463
The whiplash this book gives. I was really enjoying it again as a Not Mary Bennet Regency Story, but then "Mary" started being a Royal Idiot and the book is growing tedious again. Also, Caroline Bingley willingly scaling a mountain to chase a libertine rake?? HARDLY. And why is no one debating philosophy through scripture? This was England. 19thC. Everyone knew the moral standard was from Someone above mortal whim.
— Sep 13, 2025 10:46PM

Beth
is on page 213 of 463
Good grief! This book is too long. Why does the author write as if no people existed in the whole of England besides already described P&P characters? Like Mary has NOOO options besides living forever off the charity of others. Pretty sure the Bingleys and Darcys would have gladly thrown any number of balls to get Mary introduced to eligible young men! Why is she only now remembering her aunt and uncle exist??
— Sep 08, 2025 09:53PM

Beth
is on page 110 of 463
This is going to be difficult to review. It's excellently written. Unfortunately, the Mary Bennet presented to us here does not feel like an accurate version of Jane Austen's Mary. It would be an immense challenge to make *that* Mary a relatable and likable character however, so I understand the temptation to make other characters look worse in an attempt to justify her actions and behaviours.
— Sep 06, 2025 12:37PM