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Melanie
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Chapter 15 - why not have the whole chapter in regular font and thoughts italisized? Also, why is the first sentence of every chapter in caps?
— Sep 10, 2025 09:31PM
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Melanie
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Chapter 13 - the whole chapter is italisized except for one portion of a sentence. Even if it was a flashback, it could have been italisized. I feel like the fonts are being misused.
— Sep 09, 2025 09:39PM
Melanie
is on page 44 of 534
Dont think they did a thorough read before publishing. Sentence structure error on page 93. 'Kneeling down to the inspect the dust covered shelves'
Not bad overall this far
— Sep 09, 2025 09:28PM
Not bad overall this far

