M'rella’s Reviews > Virian Conundrum > Status Update

Glad this is over.

Yep. This story is definitely a conundrum O.o Normally I enjoy this kind of set-up, but honestly, I can't figure these characters (along with the Universe) out. Currently skimming through an endless sex scene. If anything, these boys have stamina LOL

Um... have these alien people ever heard of introductions? O.o They expect Max to know everyone and everything without even being greeted at the airport landing site?
How is it that the puny boring humans are winning the war? The prince's alien race is so much more advanced on all levels.
Nothing makes sense here.