Alyza’s Reviews > Powerless > Status Update

rushing things again idk girl just wrap it up i have other stuff to read

everything black is inky

so lmk why jax can’t immediately win capture the flag by teleporting himself to it :|

i feel like both of the trials so far have happened in 2 chapters with nothing really interesting or unexpected happening

first of all how would ace know about kai and paedyn to make an illusion about it

2nd of all the flirting in this is way too corny for me pls lady hire an editor this book reads like a first rough draft like 40 grit rough

also might be a hater but kai’s yoink everyone’s power thing is kind of a cop out solution to everything idkkkk

idk girl they just have no natural chemistry with one another and things feel rushed

i know what ms author was going for with who she wants kai to be but hes literally a child and doesn’t feel like the dark morally gray man she wants him to be

also tired of reading “future enforcer” every 4 seconds. is there a current enforcer how come we don’t talk abt them not that it would be good anyway

pls take hands out of the pockets and no more leaning on doorways

paedyn will be unpredictable and choose to have adena make her a red (a guess) dress instead of green!

this story is obviously hunger games inspired in concept but there really isnt anything happening and it doesn’t feel extravagant and elitist at all ??

-kitt looks like his dad (stated 82 times)
-kai never learned to keep his hands to himself in kindergarten
-corny flirting: stop it
-what are these games even about