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“ Perhaps that was the great Ill of the world, that those prone to evil were left untouched by guilt to a degree so vast that they might sleep through a storm, while better men conscience stained men, lay awake as though that very storm persisted unyieldingly in the furthest reaches of their soul.”
Sep 17, 2025 09:22AM
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Nev March is on page 258 of 368
“He collected the image and stored it away for moments just like these, when the fear overwhelm him and only she would do for relief.”

Brilliant
Sep 17, 2025 10:04AM
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Nev March
Nev March is on page 217 of 368
And now it turns predictable. Disappointing. So Harris sets up a character of courage and then has him behave like a mouse. Sad. Does every story about injustice have to be dismal? No wonder folks read crime novels where at least there is a fiction of a character arc and consistency.
Sep 17, 2025 08:31AM
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Nev March
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Emotional and lyrical, escalating in pace and tempo
Sep 17, 2025 07:43AM
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Nev March
Nev March is 20% done
Beautiful. Endearing characters and excellent craft in the switched points of view
Sep 16, 2025 02:27PM
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