Madison’s Reviews > The Dragon's Promise > Status Update

"our children" girl ur 17

THATS STUPID BIRD SHOULD BE DEAD

laziest writing ever bro i had to set the book down in outrage

like they all just AGREED to help without any hesitation, which is SO UNREALISTIC. the book is more focused on getting the reader through the story than actually focusing on the characters moving the story along.

a) i am sick of all the jealousy it's SO BORING

b) tell me why some big physical action in the plot is happening EVERY CHAPTER. first she sneaks out, then she uses her stepmothers portal, then she finds the demon entrance , then earthquake, then gen gets knocked unconscious, then they are fighting, then they are fleeing, then they accidentally stumble across the magical lake, ALL IN 2 CHAPTERS???

"the dragons promise"... page 160 stage exit left the dragon (permanently?)

:dumbest girl ever gets extremely lucky every single time something bad happens (she is the root cause of the bad happenings)

i really hate her

she got herself into this giant stupid mess and then has the nerve to act surprised when it absolutely does not go her way

only 20 pages in and yet so much has happened but it's literally only vibes with no rhyme or reason whatsoever and it's pissing me off