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He watches me a moment, and I want to ask. I want to know. What do you see?
But it's not fun if he just tells me.
That last sentence, I think, exemplifies the issues I have with the story so far as and Ada as a narrator. I like cat and mouse, but the characters do have to talk at some point. Especially if you want us to buy a romance between them. I don't care if you want to claim it's a slow burn.
— Sep 19, 2025 05:21PM
But it's not fun if he just tells me.
That last sentence, I think, exemplifies the issues I have with the story so far as and Ada as a narrator. I like cat and mouse, but the characters do have to talk at some point. Especially if you want us to buy a romance between them. I don't care if you want to claim it's a slow burn.
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