zoë’s Reviews > Fault Line > Status Update

I think I would enjoy this more if it was written from Ani's perspective rather than from Ben's (aka an outsider).

This is one hella weird relationship. First Ani looks up Ben's background (i.e.: what his parents do for a living, what are some of his life goals), now she's talking about what sort of impression his clothes give off on their date?? Like “they that you care about your appearance somewhat but you're not that vain and I like it.” Okay... but is there a need to mention this in front of the guy wearing said clothes???