Alyza’s Reviews > Powerless > Status Update

rushing things again idk girl just wrap it up i have other stuff to read

everything black is inky

so lmk why jax can’t immediately win capture the flag by teleporting himself to it :|

i feel like both of the trials so far have happened in 2 chapters with nothing really interesting or unexpected happening

idk girl they just have no natural chemistry with one another and things feel rushed

i know what ms author was going for with who she wants kai to be but hes literally a child and doesn’t feel like the dark morally gray man she wants him to be

also tired of reading “future enforcer” every 4 seconds. is there a current enforcer how come we don’t talk abt them not that it would be good anyway

pls take hands out of the pockets and no more leaning on doorways

paedyn will be unpredictable and choose to have adena make her a red (a guess) dress instead of green!

this story is obviously hunger games inspired in concept but there really isnt anything happening and it doesn’t feel extravagant and elitist at all ??

-kitt looks like his dad (stated 82 times)
-kai never learned to keep his hands to himself in kindergarten
-corny flirting: stop it
-what are these games even about

feels like a poorly written hunger games and there’s 100 different types of powers

not sure if i’m considered old now but not really resonating with characters that are 18/19

i like paedyn’s chapters more than kai’s. his don’t feel like a different voice just paedyn as kai. also why do we feel the need explain super obvious thoughts and feelings??