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tbh this is how dark mafia world should portrayed instead of how it looks like in other novels that wrote mafia more like prince charming, no murder, no illegal stuff, etc (i dont wanna say which novel is it, ytjt)

❌Ada misspellings nama, sekejap Nickolai, sekejap Nikcolai.

❌Kadang keliru jugak, sekejap current timeline, sekejap flash back timeline. Author macam tak pisahkan dalam perenggan yang lain, or guna penanda masa macam "beberapa tahun yang lalu" "beberapa jam yang lalu", dll. 😅