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Shauna
Shauna is on page 100 of 704
Cute writing style so far. Very simple and direct sentences. I think this must be deliberate, to make it feel like it's a fable or a story being told around a camp fire.
Sep 26, 2025 01:38AM
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Shauna
Shauna is on page 400 of 704
The overly simplistic storytelling style is starting to get a little jarring: "They went to tell the high priestess the news. But she was dead. They would have to choose a new high priestess." O..kay?

It's almost like a story for (or told by?) children, except there's graphic murder and a lot of sex.
Sep 27, 2025 04:23AM
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Shauna
Shauna is on page 230 of 704
Simple language continues. This would be a great read for someone learning English as a second language and wanting some practice.

Separately, wow this author does not like faces with sharp noses and thin lips! I didn't realize that all of us sharp-nosed, thin-lipped people were naturally villainous.
Sep 26, 2025 09:35AM
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Shauna
Shauna is on page 10 of 704
Only on page ten and so far we've been introduced to all the standard template characters of a Ken Follett novel, and I'm pretty sure I know how this story is going to play out 😆 Will it be Pillars of the Earth, just with the names swapped out, and a cathedral swapped for Stonehenge? Let's find out!
Sep 25, 2025 04:16AM
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