Laura Flanagan’s Reviews > Metal Slinger > Status Update
Laura Flanagan
is 88% done
Maybe it’s just me, but the word “panties” should never used in a new adult romantasy. I feel like the author disliked writing the smut scenes as much as I disliked reading them. They felt out of place, jarring and almost like AI wrote them.
— Sep 28, 2025 10:35PM
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Laura Flanagan
is 92% done
I don’t think I’ve ever said this… but the first 75% of this book was WAY better than what I’m currently reading. There’s typos, inconsistencies in the character development, plot holes, etc. I have so many questions. It’s like the characters got to shore and the author forgot how to write. The beginning was BEAUTIFUL!
— Sep 28, 2025 10:37PM
Laura Flanagan
is 67% done
Definitely slow in its progress because of how it details the days, but honestly I don’t mind. The characters and relationship are so fun.
— Sep 24, 2025 06:50PM
