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Read the first chapter and it will be enough for quite some time.
The overall settings seems very interesting. Other than that, we have another protagonist who's good at everything, and there are so many things in the writing that are so wrong to me that I could write SEVERAL pages for a line by line analysis of just these few pages in the first chapter.
— Sep 29, 2025 12:18AM
The overall settings seems very interesting. Other than that, we have another protagonist who's good at everything, and there are so many things in the writing that are so wrong to me that I could write SEVERAL pages for a line by line analysis of just these few pages in the first chapter.
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