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Lily Pedersen
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PROTAGONIST: The protagonist in my story is Sophie Foster. She is a thirteen year old girl. When she was a baby the black swan messed with her brain and made her super overpowered. She didn't know she was an elf until Fitz came to take her to Elvin city. She grew up with humans and then she started to get migraines. She has telepathy and she is the strongest to ever live. She has blond hair and she is small.
— Sep 29, 2025 09:40AM
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Lily Pedersen
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STATIC VS. DYNAMIC. Sophie Foster is a dynamic character because, when she was little she was taken away from her family and placed in a new home. Then when she was 10 she discovered that she was an elf and went to Atlanta, a world with elves. This changed her life forever. Her flaws are that she is very clumsy. Every book has her on the cover and she is on every page. This shows that she is a dynamic character.
— Oct 27, 2025 09:34AM
Lily Pedersen
is on page 300 of 624
CONFLICT: Right now in my book it's character vs self. She is trying to fix her mind because it's breaking. Also other people are able to come into her mind which shouldn't be happening. On page 275 it says, "Sophie covered her ears like it could somehow shield her mind somehow." Fitz was able to get into her mind which should not happen. She has the strongest mind in the community so this shouldn't be happening.
— Oct 20, 2025 09:41AM
Lily Pedersen
is on page 300 of 624
CONFLICT: Right now in my book it's character vs self. She is trying to fix her mind because it's breaking. Also other people are able to come into her mind which shouldn't be happening. On page 275 it says, "Sophie covered her ears like it could somehow shield her mind somehow." Fitz was able to get into her mind which should not happen. She has the strongest mind in the community so this shouldn't be happening.
— Oct 20, 2025 09:41AM
Lily Pedersen
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MAKE PREDICTIONS: I have no clue how my book is going to end. My prediction for the next chapter is that Sophie is going to heal Fintand. I'm not positive but she is very strong with her mind and I think she can do it. On page 234 it says,"The healing was tomorrow and the Councillors and Fitz were counting on her to get through it safely." I think it's for shadowing that the healing will go well.
— Oct 13, 2025 09:36AM
Lily Pedersen
is on page 172 of 624
POINT OF VIEW: My book is a 1st person narrator. The story is told by a girl and it's from her point of view. You can hear other people speak but you can only hear her thoughts. She is on every page because the story is told from her point of view. I know that because if something else is happening in the story you can't see or hear them you can only see what when or where the main character is.
— Oct 06, 2025 09:30AM
