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liz is 40% done
Definitely could have done without the graphic rape in the beginning of the book. The constant POV shifts w/headers within chapters read a little immature. Since the characters' stories don't significantly overlap in the first half of the book, this would have been better handled with alternate POV chapters.
Nov 27, 2016 11:03AM
Mélusine (Doctrine of Labyrinths, #1)

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