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Colourfulmind
is 13% done
I don't like the writing and the FMC in her head...she
's just accepting everything as it is, there is no depth or real character. Just damsel in distress mode. Is it getting better at any point?
— Sep 30, 2025 02:24PM
's just accepting everything as it is, there is no depth or real character. Just damsel in distress mode. Is it getting better at any point?
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Colourfulmind
is 5% done
This start confuses me... the FMC Teller us she cannot remember the first 17 years of her life, but she talks as if she does. And her thoughts are kind of too jumpy...
— Sep 30, 2025 07:59AM
