Dave Stone’s Reviews > Villains Vignettes: Volume 2 > Status Update

This is a book of short stories, almost novellas. The first one is giving me trouble. The premise is SO contrived that it just couldn't happen. And then the reactions of the NPCs is so unlikely that adds another layer. What could be an interesting character study / homecoming story is just author forced horseshit. The suspension of my disbelief is severely taxed.