Riane’s Reviews > The Deer and the Dragon > Status Update
Riane
is 15% done
Hmm... I'm six chapters in and I won't lie that I'm struggling a bit with the exposition. I'm interested enough still to keep going but I've found myself thinking "Omg I get it, please get on with it" several times.
— Oct 03, 2025 08:41PM
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Riane’s Previous Updates
Riane
is 42% done
Starting to enjoy this a bit more. I gotta say though, our leading lady kinda annoys me. Me sitting here just wanting more of Fauna, she's great, I love her.
— Oct 12, 2025 01:21PM
Riane
is 30% done
Things are finally picking up... ish. Piper is great at creating a scene but sometimes there's an excess of description that feels somewhat unnecessary -- to the point that sometimes I lose track of the point of a particular scene. I'm enjoying it more than the first 5 chapters though.
— Oct 10, 2025 10:03AM
