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This series should be renamed The Trials and Tribulations of Pagan Moore. Sometimes, I feel like the plot was written as it came to Abbi Glines’ mind and not thoroughly planned out. Why was the Voodoo subplot so easily overcome in Predestined? Why is Jay, the high school boyfriend who so easily discarded Pagan, with whom she’s voiced little attachment in previous books, now suddenly his soul’s other half?
Oct 04, 2025 06:54AM
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Jes ♡ is on page 175 of 188
Cheeky ending! Was nearly going to end on the most romantic note as well!
Oct 11, 2025 03:25AM
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Jes ♡ is on page 174 of 188
"Just knowing that I'd get to watch them find each other and fall in love in every life made me smile."
AWWW, the love between true soulmates
Oct 11, 2025 03:24AM
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Jes ♡
Jes ♡ is on page 172 of 188
...her soul will now be connected to Jay's? Would it have made more sense that Pagan was actually Dank's soulmate but that her existence in Jay's life had skewed his own soul's connection i.e. he wasn't able to recognise his true soulmate because Pagan lived? Reminiscent of Saroya's presence in Elizabeth's body, rendering Lothaire unable to properly recognise his Bride.
Oct 11, 2025 03:09AM
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Jes ♡ is on page 172 of 188
"This soul had been Victoria's mate. Now that it was damaged, the connection had transferred. Jay's soul was now complete."
While I'm glad Jay has found someone other than Pagan to pine for, it seems the rules of the book change to suit the plot. When Wyatt died, his soul reincarnated and he and Miranda were able to, unknowingly, reunite and connect again. Now that Victoria's mate has died and will be sent to Hell...
Oct 11, 2025 03:07AM
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Jes ♡
Jes ♡ is on page 159 of 188
If the Deity truly did wipe Pagan's memories, why allow her heart, her soul, to recognise Dank's...soul too? Why allow her to always be aware of his presence? Surely, Dank must be her true soulmate for her to feel these things. How was Pagan even able to retrieve her memories at all unless Dank was her true soulmate and her yearning outweighed the memory loss?
"The Deity had screwed up with this soul match." JAY!
Oct 11, 2025 01:47AM
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Jes ♡
Jes ♡ is on page 140 of 188
If Jay is truly Pagan’s soul’s mate, why does she yearn so for Dank? Why can she physically feel his presence without seeing him? Why does her soul try to leave her body when they kiss? Surely, that is a true reaction of a soul meeting its other half, even though Dank possesses no soul himself.
Oct 09, 2025 03:58PM
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Oct 06, 2025 02:15PM
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Jes ♡
Jes ♡ is on page 92 of 188
Dank is granted a chance by the Deity with Pagan but Gee isn’t allowed to get attached?
Oct 06, 2025 08:38AM
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Jes ♡
Jes ♡ is on page 87 of 188
More typos - Nathan instead of Jay!
Oct 06, 2025 08:32AM
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