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cannot stand the book so far: the prose is mediocre, it’s lewd and gratuitous, I can’t care about the characters. Also so romanticized: heavy on the read-too-much-Harry-Potter-erotica-in-high-school vibes, reads like Choi’s smutty fan fiction about how she wanted high-school to go. honestly embarrassing for an adult to have written this. Still early so maybe redeemable but currently i hate it!
Oct 08, 2025 10:36AM
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Will I also cannot stand Choi’s constant analytical interjections. Most of the time it feels like an insult to my intelligence: i’ve just seen something happen in scene, and then she immediately explains the significance of the scene to me … like, bro, i just read the scene. Also just makes the characters feel so flat and pointless.

She has no sense of subtly or sparsity!


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