Gotobedmouse’s Reviews > Hara's Legacy > Status Update
Gotobedmouse
is 80% done
So much whining and creepiness during the steamy scenes, only 20% of this book is devoted to world building. There are many grammar and typo mistakes throughout the book. I am very disappointed in this book.
— Dec 03, 2016 07:02AM
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Gotobedmouse
is 40% done
Wish it had more world building and less steamy parts.
— Nov 28, 2016 09:55PM
