River Snowdrop’s Reviews > Small Worlds > Status Update

Little inconsistencies* are making this a frustrating read, as well as how boring it is so far bc nothing’s happening and the language is VERY repetitive.

*Example: he’s just talked about how the last time he smoked a joint was “near the end of May” but literally ten pages earlier (very much later than May) he describes passing a joint round with his brother and brother’s girlfriend. It feels sloppy.