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Thank god their separation ended. The pacing is much better
— Oct 16, 2025 01:55AM
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I don’t love the choppy way this is laid out. Everything feels very disjointed and when we finally get an interesting scene, it gets cut short.
— Oct 14, 2025 08:57PM