Morgan’s Reviews > The Friendship Contract > Status Update
Morgan
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So far, I enjoy the witty commentary and banter the main character gives the reader. Excited to see where this goes.
— Oct 18, 2025 05:54PM
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Morgan
is on page 32 of 230
Some of the transitions in terms of movement and thought of the characters is unclear. One moment they’re sitting next to one another and now somehow they’re either behind one another or on top or something I’m not really sure. “Their bodies are melded together…” whatever that means and her hand is in his dick now…I’m confused.
— Oct 22, 2025 11:27AM
Morgan
is on page 28 of 230
Some of the wording and inner thoughts are awkwardly placed and I feel like there is a lot more telling me than showing me.
— Oct 21, 2025 10:53AM
