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I want to like this book but the way it started is not good. It’s like the author didn’t know how to write an opening line so she didn’t bother.
— Oct 20, 2025 04:27PM
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Janna
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I’m not connecting to the main character at all. She doesn’t feel like a person, just a collection of actions with no motivations or inner monologue. Also, why didn’t anyone tell these BookTok authors about “show, don’t tell”?
— Oct 21, 2025 08:17PM
