anonymous’s Reviews > The Alpha's Fated Encounter > Status Update
anonymous
is 50% done
I’ve been trying so hard to stick with this but the writing is soooooo bad. Clunky, awkward sentence structure, and the DIALOGUE makes me want to do something unhinged. It’s so unnatural and forced. NO ONE talks like these characters it’s crazy uncomfortable. The characters are inconsistent in their personalities and make some seriously out of pocket decisions that make no sense and the PLOT HOLES are wild.
— Oct 20, 2025 09:04PM
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anonymous
is 3% done
lol “it didn’t look like standard hospital food- a still-hot burger and fries with a pudding cup and container of diced fruit.” That is exactly how I would describe “standard hospital food” 🧐 what am I missing?
— Oct 16, 2025 11:17PM
anonymous
is 3% done
It’s giving✨try-hard✨
Why is this dialogue so awkward? It might be the most clunky and unnatural I’ve ever read, not even exaggerating.
— Oct 16, 2025 10:56PM
Why is this dialogue so awkward? It might be the most clunky and unnatural I’ve ever read, not even exaggerating.
