RoXXie | The Art of Reading ’s Reviews > What Lies Beyond the Veil > Status Update

Who the hell tags this book as "romantasy" or "romance"?
This book is at best "porn/erotica", but definitely not romance.
The MMC is grooming the FMC, by calling her "little one". Dude, you either are a nasty pedophile or you want a woman! And please, dear female authors, stop your MMCs using the phrase "good girl", because I bet your morally gray characters won't like to be called "good boy" like a damn dog!

Oh wow, seriously... Did the author even think about what she wrote?

He (MMC) was so tall that while kneeling his head was level with her (FMC) boobs and also his cock hung as low as his knees? What is it, that a male sex always needs to be described as so big, that it would probably split a woman in half.

Oh please, why does the FMC has to be one of those again who can't even keep her footing while being on the run? I am getting tired of these weak FMC who all of a sudden get a huge amount of power, but can NOT jump of a fallen tree trunk