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raye
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This could have been a novella. Also him acting like a deranged billionaire w millions while being a SCARE ACTOR on a theme park budget is hilarious to me
— Oct 24, 2025 12:53PM
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raye
is on page 305 of 319
How does she keep ending up backstage where are the security officers
— Oct 24, 2025 03:02PM
raye
is on page 208 of 319
Ohhhh you can definitely tell that the author read lights out and said “hey I can do this too”
— Oct 24, 2025 01:18PM
raye
is on page 190 of 319
“I know he doesn’t have an evil bone in his body” Maxine (horrible name) I’m going to hold your hand as I tell you this
— Oct 24, 2025 01:06PM
raye
is on page 133 of 319
It just really takes me out of the story when people / items have the same name as me
— Oct 24, 2025 12:13PM
raye
is on page 53 of 319
It’s the 6 paragraphs talking about how consent is so important to him so the readers don’t start to realize that this is absolutely insane
— Oct 23, 2025 05:49PM
raye
is on page 41 of 319
Oh she can’t “find him” on social media. Miss girl you’re best friends with a theme park employee, you start on her Facebook page and you work from there. Come on. It’s not hard.
— Oct 23, 2025 04:41PM
raye
is on page 29 of 319
She would have never been able to find a “back of house” area that easily
— Oct 23, 2025 04:31PM
