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How does she keep ending up backstage where are the security officers

Ohhhh you can definitely tell that the author read lights out and said “hey I can do this too”

“I know he doesn’t have an evil bone in his body” Maxine (horrible name) I’m going to hold your hand as I tell you this

This could have been a novella. Also him acting like a deranged billionaire w millions while being a SCARE ACTOR on a theme park budget is hilarious to me

It just really takes me out of the story when people / items have the same name as me

It’s the 6 paragraphs talking about how consent is so important to him so the readers don’t start to realize that this is absolutely insane

Oh she can’t “find him” on social media. Miss girl you’re best friends with a theme park employee, you start on her Facebook page and you work from there. Come on. It’s not hard.

She would have never been able to find a “back of house” area that easily