Madi F’s Reviews > The Perfect Guy Doesn't Exist > Status Update

The pacing is killing me… like, the past 50 odd pages are all about the SAME day, and one singular conversation just lasted 13 pages. I’m trying so hard to get this finished but I’m definitely struggling with this pace

I hate hate HAAAAAATE how the author is trying to make the MC more “relatable” by having them use the wrong ‘your’ and ‘their’ - UGH it’s making me cringe! Surely by the MCs grown age, she would know the difference by now! ESPECIALLY if she is a fanfiction writer - autocorrect exists for a reason people!