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Adam
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the structure of this story is infuriating; girl runs around with boy she hates (and constantly has to remind the reader why she's still with him, presumably to set up a ham-fisted scene later on where the two are conveniently together), comes upon a scene of violence, is shocked, runs around with boy she hates~
— Oct 28, 2025 03:35PM
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Adam
is on page 155 of 208
GIRL IT HAS TAKEN YOU THIS LONG TO SIDE WITH THE PEASANTS?! YOU SHOULD BE EATEN
— Oct 28, 2025 03:57PM
Adam
is on page 128 of 208
comment about how her dress doesn't have pockets - boooooo
girl you're wearing a slip dress, what good would a pocket be with that material? get real
— Oct 28, 2025 03:23PM
girl you're wearing a slip dress, what good would a pocket be with that material? get real
